Showing posts with label writing styles. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing styles. Show all posts

Monday, October 21, 2013

Read Everything. Almost.

By Mandy Brown Houk


Read, read, read. Read everything - trash, classics, good and bad, and see how they do it. Just like a carpenter who works as an apprentice and studies the master. Read! ~William Faulkner

I am a picky reader. If I had my druthers, I’d probably confine myself to coming-of-age novels written within the last two hundred years, primarily by Southern and/or rural writers with a quick wit and a dark sense of humor.
            
I didn’t even realize this was my default preference until I took a look at the books and stories I most often assign or recommend in my English and writing classes. To Kill a Mockingbird. The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn. Peace Like a River. Cold Sassy Tree. As I Lay Dying. Provinces of Night. All Over But the Shoutin’.
            
But I know that, as a writer, I can’t seal myself off from the rest of the literary world. Even if what I hope to write is a coming-of-age novel with a Southern feel, I have to read more widely – otherwise my novel will have clean, neatly browned edges, and while that’s a good trait in a Christmas cookie, it’s yawn-inducing in a novel.
            
And so, I force myself to branch out. Here’s what a few somewhat-recent reads have taught me, which I hope will affect and improve my own writing:
           
YA: The Book Thief – Markus Zusak
Never hold back. Never let convention dictate who narrates the story. Had I come up with the idea to use Death personified as a narrator, my timidity and devotion to convention would most likely have prevented me from doing so. But Death is the only one who could tell this devastating, wholly original story. I’m glad (and fiercely jealous) that Zusak isn’t the coward I would have been.
           
Pulitzer Prize Winner: Tinkers – Paul Harding
There’s no telling what the literary elite will like. The writing is gorgeous and intricate, but the story made my head spin. (I’m apparently too stupid for this kind of book, but if you loved it, that’s fabulous.) Here’s what I learned: I don’t need to shoot for literary recognition and prizes, which, honestly, used to be my goal. By reading this book, though, I realized that story is more important to me than language/concept/high art, even though I’m a language junkie. I don’t need to write above my own intellect, attempting to be critically acclaimed. I just want to write a meaningful story (with lovely language) that readers can sink into and adore.
           
Memoir: Same Kind of Different As Me – Denver Moore/Ron Hall/Lynn Vincent
This book is structured so that two narrators alternate chapters, telling their sides of the central story, with a third author acting as the invisible “as-told-to” scribe. I learned a few things from this book: first (narrator #1), don’t dumb down your writing by too much misspelling and misspeaking, even if that’s accurate to the narrator’s speech patterns. A little bit of dialect goes a long, long, long, long way. Second (narrator #2), ease up on metaphors. Just say what you mean and don’t try to be clever. It’s annoying. Third, if the story is gripping, mediocre writing can be forgiven. This story is the kind that works its way into your heart and changes it from the inside. Beautiful enough to (mostly) overcome the writing flaws.

Modern British Lit: The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Nighttime – Mark Haddon
Don’t ignore a novel in the bookstore just because it has weird sketches imbedded in the narrative. I picked this book up and put it right back down again because of the odd diagrams and happy faces I saw while flipping through. It was two years before I picked it up again because a trusted friend recommended (insisted) I read it. So that’s the lesson as a reader. The lesson as a writer? Let the events in the book drive the emotion. Don’t pile a bunch of sentimental language on top of the horrible thing that’s happening—the language will muck it all up and dilute the effect. This book is narrated by a boy with Asperger’s syndrome – he is fundamentally incapable of feeling, interpreting, and expressing the emotions that the rest of us can’t hold in. So the language is about as matter-of-fact and detached as it can possibly be—yet I bawled like a baby multiple times while reading it.

A Novel That’s Not a Novel: Olive Kitteridge ­– Elizabeth Strout
Don’t let rules and boundaries stifle the story you have to tell. (Note: this is a Pulitzer winner, too, and in this case, I whole-heartedly, boisterously agree!) I don’t have any idea why/how “they” classify this book as a novel. It seems, instead, to be an anthology of short stories, all set in the same town, told chronologically, and with a certain grumpy woman named Olive appearing in each one. Olive is the POV character in only a few of them; the others may feature her prominently, moderately, or even in cameo-like fashion (in one story, she simply appears in a restaurant and is overheard being pushy with her husband – that’s it). But the book is a triumph of language, heart, and humor, and a brilliant treatise on the human condition (that is: we suck but we need each other anyway).

Classical Lit: A Christmas Carol – Charles Dickens
There’s a reason books become classics. Don’t overlook them just because your frizzy-haired, frumpy-clothed English teacher assigned them. Nobody creates characters like Charles Dickens, and this, to me, is his shining example. He wasn’t paid by the word for this one, so he gets right to the heart and manages to create a living, breathing, eternal character in 60 or 70 pages.

Popular Fiction/Thriller: Iron House – John Hart
Don’t judge a book by its sales. As someone who leans more toward literary fiction than blockbuster, I sometimes assume that a book with great sales numbers probably isn’t well-written. I expect a tight plot, but flat writing, cardboard characters, little emotional impact. With all four of John Hart’s books, I’ve been wrong, but most notably with Iron House. This book has taught me that character development enhances and even causes the tension in a story, regardless of genre. I don’t have to choose one or the other; I can (and should) have both.
       
I haven’t given up my persnickety reading habits. I admit that there are books and genres I probably won’t ever read (I won’t mention them here, because everyone’s favorites are different -- as Andre Maurois said, "In literature as in love, we are astonished at what is chosen by others”).
            
But I will continue to force myself out of my comfortable orbit, and I hope that all of this reading will make my own writing better, wider, broader, more.

What books have taught you something specific about your writing? 
What have you learned from reading outside your genre or comfort zone?


About the Writer:  Mandy Brown Houk is a freelance writer and editor, and she teaches at a small private high school in Old Colorado City. She's written for several magazines and anthologies, and has completed two novels--only one of which is worthy of the light of day. Mandy is currently seeking agent representation. Her web site is www.mandybrownhouk.com.
           


Wednesday, June 5, 2013

Writer’s Block – Real or Fiction?

By Deb McLeod

 
Writers Block by Deb McLeod
Lend me your advice… 

Recently, while working full time on my novel series, teaching three creative writing classes a week, working one-on-one with more than two handfuls of individual clients, running a writer’s book club, and being a wife and mother, I found it necessary to join an experimental writing group. 

When you teach writing sometimes it can feel like you need to fill your own creative coffers. The idea of a group just for me was appealing. The premise of the group was so intriguing I found myself happily anticipating that first meeting and rushing off to be a student once again. 

In 2004 I shut down my writing coaching business to get my MFA in just such a mood. This time I wasn’t looking for such a drastic change; all I wanted was the energetic boost I would get from trying something brand new. New skills and new writing friends. Nirvana!

But I forgot about a major component of me: my coaching business and even my writing are based on my ability to listen. I listen deeply to my clients and help them produce their project and learn not only craft but the voice inside that’s trying to come out. We work on their personal cadre of metaphor and meaning. When I write, I listen to my own work and what it wants to be. I continually surprise myself with what I’ve said and I follow that, enriching my writing with meaning that connects deeply with me. In my coaching business one of my clients once called me the accidental therapist. 

This group, which is DeAnna Knippling’s Wild Ass Novel Project, is two groups of people writing collaborative novels. Wonderful idea. Wonderful writers. I am so impressed with the passion and skill level of everyone I’ve met in the group. 

So here I am "listening me" in a situation that demands I be "participant me" in so many ways that I’m not. This is exactly what I signed up for. To challenge what I'm already doing with something new.

We’re writing in the genre of light fantasy (I hope I got that right). A plot with monsters, ghosts and magic.  My publishing credits run to the literary short story. Even my eight-book series is morphing into my usual – though when I first sat down to write it, 50 Shades of Gray had just come out. I said: Oh yeah, I can write smut too (to which my daughter laughed). Of course I failed at that, but birthed my series The Julia Set which has takes the holomorphic function of Julia Sets into the realm of good and evil. 

In the WANP, we’re writing a male protagonist. (Not my usual MO.) 

There is no love story. (What??!)

We began with plot (where I have always started with character). 

We threw out ideas for place and occupation. From there we used a 4-point method to plot the entire book. In two meetings we have all the scenes and their plot. We have a one-line summary of our protagonist’s internal flaw. All characters are named and physically described. We’re ready to write, I think. 

This project is going to be a wild ass success and I’m honored to be a part of it. It’s been a fascinating journey already but I’m afraid I haven’t been of much use yet in the group. Not an aggressive soul – remember, I’m the quintessential listener who mulches what I hear. So while I’m mulching, the group has zipped on by to the next scene and complication. By the time I’m ready to contribute anything at all, it’s too late. And what I would contribute would likely be along the lines of – this particular monster is created around greed, what thematically can we say about greed that underlies the plot and connects the characters? How can we use greed to show…? 

Completely out of place. This is fast writing, not my usual mulching.

A kindred soul tried to help me get a point out in all the hubbub of creativity but as soon as the attention turned to me at her behest, I froze. I managed to get out what I remembered of what I’d tried to say some minutes earlier. Of course it went flat – a moment of silence from the group – then the speed picked up again as they moved on. 

So now I’m experiencing a creative block. Brain freeze. Deer in the headlights. Shut down. DeAnna will pose a question and nothing at all will come to mind. I’m not feeling it. Not connected with the story. But they are. How are they doing that and I’m not? 

Insecure, uncomfortable and berating myself for taking on another project when I’m already full up. I remember this feeling. In my early, early writing days, there were times I was workshopped or critiqued into silence. Not that that’s what this is at all, there is no one critiquing me (except me!), but there is group consensus and I’m not yet one of the group because I’m not feeling the process or connected with the story. 

So what do you do when you’re blocked? I’m asking because I really don’t want to bag it. I want to be part of this project and I want to learn a new way that can only enrich my writing and my work with my clients. 

I know I’m not the only one to ever experience some sort of writer’s block. So what do you do when you’re blocked? Any advice? Any stories I can learn something from?


About the Author: Deb McLeod, is a writer, creative writing coach and founder of The Writing Ranch. She has both an MFA and a BA in creative writing. She has been teaching and coaching for over ten years. Deb has published short fiction in anthologies and journals. She has written articles and creative nonfiction. Deb has been a professional blogger, tech writer, graphic artist and Internet marketing specialist.