Putting the Story Together Historical Fiction Series - Part Three

By: Jason Evans


March brings the worst snow to Colorado while also bringing dreams of sunny Aprils and warm Mays. Welcome back to the Pikes Peak Historical fiction blog. In January we talked about the idea for your story. here In February, we talked about doing preliminary research on your novel. here  Today we talk about how to put the story together itself.

Now full disclosure here: I am NOT a pantser. If you don’t know what I’m talking about, then let me introduce you to the writing conflict of our time: Pantser vs. Plotter.

I would normally be described as a plotter. I use Blake Snyder’s screen writing book, Save the Cat, like a religious text. I have a poster-size piece of paper with all my plot points written out. I then write detailed notes on each scene I’m going to write, using 3 x 5 note cards. I carry these note cards with me religiously when I’m working on a novel. I plan out everything. (Yes, I am a little neurotic.)

Pantsers can’t stand people like me. They like to sit down in front of a computer screen, no formula, no outline, and just write. They may or may not have an idea where the story is going. They could start out writing a historical fiction that turns into a paranormal romance. They could start out writing a murder mystery that turns into a thriller. For them, the excitement is in not knowing where the story will take them.

While my OCD kicks in hard when I talk to these people, I do get what they feel. So I’m not going to judge. My advice to you today will be very general, and as always, I’ll get into more details on my own blog later. But there is nothing wrong with either.

Every novel must have certain elements or else it isn’t a novel. This is particularly true in historical fiction. Forgive me if all of you know this, but I want to cover the basics. Here is what you need:

Plot

Conflict

Character development

Genre

Scene craft

Now, I’ve left a lot out of this list, but I wanted to cover the basics with you. The Plot is the sequence of events inside a story and how they affect one another through cause and effect.

There should be highs and lows in the Plot.

Conflict is about what is preventing your characters from getting what they want. Who or what is standing in their way? Usually there are four kinds of conflict: Man v. Man, Man v. Society, Man v. Nature, and Man v. Self.  

The book World War Z by Max Brooks, is Man v. Nature. In fact, every zombie story is a Man v. Nature story. It’s the world and its new rules that the protagonist has to figure out. Once he’s learned to “Live in nature,” he’s conquered it.

A Song of Ice & Fire has several conflicts, but many of the main characters, (Circe, Tyrion, Ned Stark,) are involved in Man v. Society conflict. The world expects one thing from them and they want to do something else. Their struggles are centered in their desire to live one way and society's desire that they live another.

One of the major flaws of all new authors is that of Character Development. New WIPs from green authors usually have perfect protagonists. They are handsome, well adjusted, successful and ethical. (Did I forget rich?) The problem is that no reader will ever identify with characters that perfect. This is why you need Character Development, or a character arc. While commercial fiction does require a likable protagonist, that doesn’t mean perfect. Besides, it’s their flaws that make them charming.

In Nora Roberts Born in Ice (The Irish born Trilogy,) the protagonist Brianna Concannon runs a Bed & Breakfast in Western Ireland. She is a proud, people adverse, introverted, mouse-of-a-woman. Brianna has a heart of gold, but her anal retentiveness and pride in her house become endearing to the reader. Her character development involves her opening up and becoming open to love.

Every character needs a wound to heal or a flaw to overcome. Your reader will root for your protagonists if they learn from their mistakes and grow as human beings throughout the story. A great way to do this is to have your characters call their own problems. Don’t have characters react to external events consistently. Give them flaws and have them face problems created by those flaws. Have your protagonists face their flaws and make amends, overcoming them.

I have a book recommendation to help you with it. Local Denver author Stant Litore has written a book about the character arc called Write Characters Your Readers Won’t Forget. I won’t sugar coat it for you; the exercises in this book can be a little tedious, but they will help you flesh out your characters and give them depth. It is time well spent on your story. I liked the book so much that, even though I write plot-driven stories, I make sure to color coat character arc scenes on my Save the Cat outline board.

The next item on our list is genre. Every genre has its own convention. In Historical Fiction, a clear genre convention is that your story must stay within the bounds of actual history. If it doesn’t it isn’t historical fiction anymore. Whether you’re writing about fictional characters experiencing historical events, or writing a fictional account of historical figures suffering through historical events, the events themselves must not change. In addition, things like costumes, values, social norms and levels of knowledge should be as accurate as possible, or you’ll turn off your reader. (If your novel features Confederates winning at Gettysburg – especially with assault rifles – you’ve written science fiction, not historical fiction.)

Lastly, we have Scene Craft. Scene Craft is about how you present the little stories that make up your novel. How each event hurls the reader down a tense road towards a climatic conclusion. (Will the 10^th Mountain Division take that Italian Monastery from the Nazis? Will Betty & Jake ever get together? Can the plucky rebels defeat the evil dark lord?)

Author Warren Hammond and Literary Slush reader Angie Hodapp talked about this on Saturday, March 4^th. They borrowed the diagram below from author Dwight V. Swain’s book, Techniques of the Selling Author.  The diagram (which they designed) is below. In essence, it’s the PLOT of each scene.

But Scene Craft is also about dialogue writing, describing emotions, the voice of the characters involved. It can be overwhelming.

I don’t mean to scare anybody with this. However, these are things that should be in the back of your mind as you write your historical fiction novel. It’s a lot of work, I know. But if you’ve stayed with me for two months now, then you are clearly not a member of the herd. You have a story inside of you, and it needs to get out. So get it out! Write your novel! Let me give you a couple of shortcuts.

Every story, in my humble opinion, should follow the Three Act Structure.

ACT 1  Thesis

ACT 2 Anti-Thesis

ACT 3 Synthesis

ACT 1: Thesis. The protagonist is living his life, with or without satisfaction. Something happens and he is given a Call to Adventure. Maybe its Gandalf showing up at the shire, or King Robert Baratheon asking Ned Stark to be Hand of the King. The protagonist must think about this request, debate it. Then he must choose of his own free will, to answer the call and leave the safety of his world behind. 

ACT 2: Anti-Thesis. The protagonist is in a strange new world. The old rules don’t apply. He’s had some successes, but he makes mistakes. At some point in the middle of ACT 2, (Which should be in the middle of your book,) your protagonist must have either a false victory or a false defeat.  He must get to the midpoint and realize this is not what he wanted.

Then the bad guys strike back, your protagonist goes through more struggles. At some point he wants to give up. Blake Snyder calls this the dark night of the soul. Here there must be a whiff of death. Maybe oblivion is preferable? He goes through an existential crisis. When he comes out of that crisis, he must choose of his own free will, to continue the fight. This leads them to Act 3.

ACT 3: Synthesis. The protagonist takes everything he’s learned in Act 1 and combines it with everything he's learned in Act 2. He synthesizes his experience and comes up with new solutions to his problems and fixes them. The end.

I hope this has been helpful. If you have any questions, leave them in the comment section below and I’ll answer them. Whether you’re a pantser or a plotter, you can take these general guidelines and apply them to your writing. Good luck! Let me know how you’re doing!    

We can continue the conversation over on my website here, http://www.jason-evans.net/2017/03/structure-novel-story-arc-character-arc/

About the Author:  Jason Evans always wanted to be a writer, he just didn't know it. He grew up in Pasadena, California, in the 1980s where he watched way too much television, but was introduced to literature by his grandfather and his favorite middle school and high school teachers. He wasted his youth working at the So Cal Renaissance Faire (a dangerous place because it’s the gateway drug to other historical costumes,). In his leisure time he’s an educator, a writer, and a bon vivant. He is a graduate of UC Santa Barbara, with degrees in History & Renaissance Studies, a teaching credentials from CSU Los Angeles, as well as a graduate degree from the University of Colorado, Denver. He currently resides in Denver with his wife, the fetching Mrs. Evans, their three dogs and a mischievous cat who calls him his thrall. 

You can read Jason’s blog at Jason-evans.net

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Making History and Art with NaNoWriMo

By: Jason Evans

It's five minutes after midnight on Friday, November 4^th. I'm with a bunch of students, grandmothers, professionals and retirees at a Perkins restaurant on I-25 and Colorado Blvd. in Denver. I'm here because it’s National Novel Writing Month. About 20 people are with me, talking, laughing, eating and writing the great American novel.

So why am I here?

I started doing Nano in 2012. I completed the 50,000 word goal that year, then finished the novel in December. (It was a YA sports novel. And no, I don’t want to talk about it.)

I've participated in NaNoWriMo every year since. I’ve won more than I’ve lost, but that’s not the point.

1. NaNoWriMo is about art.

One of the things that makes up the human experience is our ability to appreciate and create art. There is nothing more human than the desire to express ourselves, to tell our story. A song, a poem, a piece of architecture, or a slice of pie can transform the artist and those who appreciate art.

Art can speak truth to power. It can bring down the mighty and uplift the oppressed. Art can inspire courage. Art can teach, tear down walls and move people to act politically. Art can also bring people together, like it did on November 4^th. But art without strife, without tension or pressure is rarely at its best.

Did you know director John Avildsen and Sylvester Stallone were given 28 days to shoot the

Source: Pixabay

first Rocky movie? What did they get for their work? 10 Academy Awards nominations and wins for best editing, best director and best movie.

2. NaNoWriMo applies pressure to art.

That’s the other reason I love NaNoWriMo. Thirty days, 50,000 words. You’d have to be insane to try and write a book in 30 days! That averages about 1,667 words a day, every day. But people all around the world not only attempt it, they do it! They do it with jobs, and midterms. They do it with babies on their hips and while they fix dinners. They do it at five in the morning and at midnight. Just thinking about it inspires me to write.

And here’s another point. Very few of those novels written in that Perkins restaurant will ever see the light of day. Many people will never finish. Some will finish and query editors, knowing it’s a longshot. Others will simply be content that they got to 50,000 words, while some will self-publish. And that’s OK.

3. NaNoWriMo forces you to drop your desire for perfection.

These people I’m sitting around aren’t here to become the next George R.R. Martin, or J.D. Robb. They’re not here for fame and fortune. They’re here because something deep inside them tells them they must be here. That if they don’t try to get this story out of them, they’ll burst.

So, I pull out my laptop, looking around at everyone else on their laptops, fire up the ole’ girl, and begin writing. I write off and on for three hours. It’s not my best work, but it’s on the page.

And that is the last thing I love about NaNoWriMo. It forces you to get something down. Nora Roberts once said, “You can fix anything but a blank page.” Participating in NaNoWriMo forces a person to look at their desire for “perfect art,” and club that thing like a seal.

You can’t wait for inspiration. You can’t wait for the perfect dialogue or plot or character arc to be laid at your feet. You just have to sit down and write. It ain’t gonna be perfect. But do you really want it to be?

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Leonardo Da Vinci once said that “Art is never finished, only abandoned.” Writing in NaNoWriMo proves Da Vinci’s wisdom.

When I worked at the renaissance faire in Southern California, I got pretty good at making basic costume pieces. Things like doublets and shirts. People would pay me to make clothes that the management would approve. (Have I mentioned the costume Nazis?)  Every item of clothing I made was filled with flaws and failures. I know because I made them.

Here’s the thing, though. The people who paid me money didn’t see them, or at least didn’t mind them. (If they had, I would have remade the garment.) But if the customer buying the art doesn’t care, why should you?

I’m going to tell you a little secret. Your art will never be perfect because you are not perfect. This is not a slight. This is the reality of the world. But the thing that makes your art worthwhile is its flaws. The scars you carry that your readers pick up. The themes you unconsciously come back to over and over again. These are the things that make your art a part of you.

“But what if I fail, Jason? What if I don’t make it to 50,000 words?”

Then you have 40,000 words, or 15,000 words or 6,000 words of your story written on paper. That’s a victory!

4. NaNoWriMo always gives another chance.

Author Aaron Michael Ritchey likes to say that in the writing game, “There are no rules.” I believe him. So if you don’t “Win” NaNoWriMo this time around, take Christmas off and revisit the novel in January. At least part of it is written now. Or, come back to it in the spring or summer for “Camp NaNoWriMo.” You can set your own word counts during camp and complete that novel.

If life gets complicated, don’t give up. Next November is only a year away. To have written a novel in a year is doing more than some professional authors. (George R.R. Martin, I’m looking at you.)

By the time this blog is published, we will be squarely in the middle of November, and way too late to sign-up for NaNoWriMo. I hope I have inspired those who’ve already started to continue their journey in book writing this month. For those who’ve just found out about it, you can still sign up for  http://campnanowrimo.org

Art for art’s sake can be a beautiful thing. But don’t take my word for it, go write your book!

About the Author:  Jason Evans always wanted to be a writer, he just didn't know it. He grew up in Pasadena, California, in the 1980s where he watched way too much television, but was introduced to literature by his grandfather and his favorite middle school and high school teachers. He wasted his youth working at the So Cal Renaissance Faire (a dangerous place because it’s the gateway drug to other historical costumes,). In his leisure time he’s an educator, a writer, and a bon vivant. He is a graduate of UC Santa Barbara, with degrees in History & Renaissance Studies, a teaching credentials from CSU Los Angeles, as well as a graduate degree from the University of Colorado, Denver. He currently resides in Denver with his wife, the fetching Mrs. Evans, their three dogs and a mischievous cat who calls him his thrall. 

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Jason’s website and blog is at www.jason-evans.net