Wednesday, December 26, 2012

Edward Cullen Strangelove, or How I Stopped Worrying and Learned to Love Twilight

By Aaron Michael Ritchey


I read Twilight after it first came out, way back in 2005.  People were saying it was going to be the next big thing, but dang, I had no idea how that could be.

I liked the book.  I liked the setting.  I liked how she handled the vampires, evolved to be sparkly and beautiful to make hunting so much easier.  Yet, I didn’t understand why that book, that story, became such a flashpoint.  A nice little love story set in Forks, Washington as a world-wide phenomenon?  Triple-platinum bestseller?  Really?

Some people hated it, and I couldn’t understand that either.  Wasn’t much to love.  Wasn’t much to hate.  It was all so simple.  The characters were fine.  The story was fine.  The writing wasn’t awful.  It was functional. 

I didn’t become a Twihard until I watched all five movies this past November in one day, at the theater, surrounded by young girls, middle-aged women, and a few men comfortable enough in their masculinity that they could get a little teary at all the angst and romance.

Now I get it.  Stephenie Meyer is a genius.  Not because she was so innovative, no, it was because she made things so simple.  The writing, the story, the characters, it was all so simple.  And moving.

There is a disconnect at times between the writing community and the general audience.  Writers don’t read like normal readers because we aren’t normal readers.  We are writers.  We devour books, and then dissect the pieces.  How could that chapter be better?  How can I avoid the clich√© there?  How can I use dialogue tags more creatively?  The general reader isn’t worrying about all that.  They want a story they can understand, that sweeps them off their feet, in a setting that seems real, and with characters they can identify with.  The general reader is very forgiving if the bones of the story speak to them.

Robert McKee of Story fame thinks story is all-powerful.  You can have iffy writing if the story is evocative, and I believe that.  Most people read fiction as an emotional experience, not a logical one.  And emotions are messy things.

The last Twilight movie, Breaking Dawn, Part II, ends with Edward and Bella in their meadow, gazing into each other’s eyes, in love, now, literally forever.  After thirteen hours of The Twilight Saga, I didn’t want to leave the theater.  I wanted to bask in their emotion, that perfect love we generally only experience in fiction.  Real love is messy and uncertain and takes work.  Bella and Edward’s perfect love is just plain perfect.  Sigh.

I want to write books that leave my readers feeling that sense of joy, wonder, and contentment.  The bad guys are all dead.  The troubles are behind our hero and his heroine, and the world makes sense.  That feeling, I believe, is more important than a perfectly balanced plot, or the depth of my characters, or my sentence variety.

Not that I’m saying I’m going to churn out first draft stuff and hope my story is good enough to hook readers.  No, I’m not going to do that.  But I do want to simplify my writing because I can make things so complicated so fast.  Ideally, my writing would be invisible—a simple doorway into the perfect fictive dream.  So, I’m going to focus on good, simple writing, a well-crafted story, and above all, emotional impact.  Perfect love.  Sigh.  Thank you, Stephenie Meyer, for giving us such a wonderful story.

About the Writer:  YA Paranormal author Aaron Michael Ritchey has penned a dozen manuscripts in his 20 years as a writer.  When he isn’t slapping around his muse, Aaron cycles to look fabulous, works in medical technologies, and keeps his family in silks and furs.  His first novel, The Never Prayer, hit the streets on March 29, 2012.

4 comments:

  1. I love this post. You nailed it right on the head. It's about the love story and the simplicity she puts in the novel. She doesn't have to be the best writer in the world she just told the perfect love story. Several girls and boys are dying to reach that utopia of love. Edward and Bella are it.

    I too took awhile to understand the meaning of the Twilight Saga but I have to say it was well worth the way to understanding.

    Fabulous blog post! I also see your book came out on my birthday so I'm heading to Amazon to check it out!

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  2. March 29, 2012! The day my writing life changed forever! Happy birthday! Thanks for the comment Jen Daiker!

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  3. This is so true. I had to leave my book club because I kept analyzing the plot mechanics and it was pissing off the other members (oops). I saw the story from the outside in. Were the plot points in the right place? Were the stakes high enough? Were the characters consistent?

    The book club members saw the story from the inside out. Do I like these characters? Can I believe what they do? Does the story move me?

    Writers and non-writers experienced the books completely differently, and I realized that the book club was not the place for me.

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  4. Thirteen hours! My butt is sore just thinking of it. I did watch the first movie and thought it was great. I then read the book and thought it was great. I haven't read any more. I'm surprised. I read all of Eric Lustbader's novels in one year. The same with Ludlum. I couldn't get enough of them.

    I now think it's because while Meyer's book was lovely and easy to read, it didn't knock my particular socks off. Not because the book wasn't great, it was, but I wasn't left excited enough to reach for the next book. In all honesty it could just boil down to I'm too lazy.

    I have to add that I tried to read 50 Shades. I really really did. But very quickly I found myself skipping sections, then a chapter or two, then setting the book down until I realized days had passed. Even then I picked it up again and tried to get involved. When I began to gag I knew I was finished.

    It's painful to realize that there may be readers out there who may feel the same about my books. Sadly, I didn't sell a few million copies first. LOL. But that's the thing about being a writer. Sometimes someone gets lucky by choosing a topic that is dead-on appropriate for the times. Others may write something just as compelling but for whatever reason, don't create the buzz these other books do.

    Look at Lee Child. How many readers are now seeing the Jack Reacher movie and wondering why they never heard of the book series.

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